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Win 3DSPoints by helping me with a poem!
Started by Jellso
(2014-05-18 14:55:58)
carlos11 (2014-05-18 15:03:27)
I'm sorry, hate to break it to you, but here's what everyone else is going to say in a much more rude manner:
1.) Wrong forum. There is a poetry forum, that's where poems go.
2.) 3DS Points are useless. Apparently the shop that I didn't ever know we had stopped working a long time ago, thus rendering Points useless.

As for your poem, I like it. Mostly because I don't like Battlefield and, from what I can tell, you're dissing it. I can't help you out, though.
Language is a tool for efficient communication. The internet is a tool for fast communication. Do not defy both intents by posting incoherent writing.
ayuki (2014-05-18 15:11:43)
Sounds like a Battlefield 4 rap.
A few lines to possibly help:

I mean, I'm enjoying my way of melee
it's not even funny
how I see your blood, it's so runny
Dice man, step up a level
EA's using you, the devil of gaming
(using SethLs line)
Battlefield Four, weapons galore.
From a pistol to a minigun, and many more!
Do we even need most of these?
They're just like the leaves of the game
Covering up all of their crap.


that's all I have for now

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2014-05-18 22:12:31

kokoro
ayuki (2014-05-18 15:28:33)
@jellso
was my stuff any decent
kokoro
shadowfan224 (2014-06-21 07:25:41)
I don't even care what they say I know i'm still gonna play, Got in trouble oh no time to suicide But i keep pushing it i'm lucky i'm still alive. Don't matter got a 7-kill streak and thrive. Now look into my eyes and you see nothing but pride. Stop having C-o-D telling us lies. But multiplayer still does suck,now that i've got an AK you better duck, before I break through the enemy lines this ain't no place for girls because I just dropped the bomb and nuked the world. Now it battlefield forever I don't why but they could've released it better. take it back to 1942 and we still ain't even through. I ain't stopping til all these faces are blue. Battlefield yeah,Peace.
hi
Naira (2014-08-18 10:48:51)
go on a chat and type /thread 73911
 

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