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The old laptop.
MeNobody14 (2013-08-08 00:24:14)Pretty dumb. How the heck is the computor supposed to hold a gun?
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I was on Amazon.com looking for old laptops that I wanted but I have never used them. Then I found a Compaq laptop from 1993. I order it for $124.99 then I receive it 4 days later. I look at the packaging and I told my mom that I got an old laptop that I might get. But the laptop that Compaq laptop in the advertisement, It was a fake brand called COMApaq. This was weird because I did not know why it was called Comapaq. So I booted it up and I heard the old hard drive start up noise. Then it did not boot up into the main operating system (Windows 3.1/MS-DOS 6.22). It started up with a homemade OS called Q-DOS, I did not know commands at the time so I put in the only diskette that came with it called OS. Then it the PC speaker beeped with a horrible high-pitched noise, then it said CRASH. So I hit the reset button but it did not start up.
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The next day after purchasing
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So I used my other computer with a floppy drive and I made my own DOS OS. I copied it to disk. But when I tried to boot up into the OS it popped up with I screen saying, "Why did you try to overwrite me, you will die in your sleep." I was scared crapless. I went to sleep then I heard a BOOM noise and I saw my laptop with a gun and pointing at my little brother. Then the laptop showed me one last screen of the OS it was saying sorry you must die now. Then it shot my heart and I died.
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