ConnorRonnoc (2013-08-03 05:12:10)

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The first part sort of reminds me of The War Of The Worlds but then towards the ending and in the following chapters, you give it your own unique touch.
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ConnorRonnoc (2013-08-03 09:34:39)

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^ Yikes, The War of The Worlds is a book that's set in the past where aliens from Mars attack, it's well worth a read. The book's pretty old.

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