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"A Precious Rainbow 2" Chapter 5
MeNobody14 (2013-07-30 20:57:40)And everypony lived happily ever after, with the horrible, gut wrenching knowledge that they'd eaten their own counterparts haunting them.
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Chapter 5
Since this story is about wrapped up, I would like to thank everypony for the great feedback, and for reading this. There will be definitely be some stories that continue this one!
Just Outside of Ponyville
3:00 PM
The sun blazed down on the backs of the ponies as they marched towards Pinkie Pie's lair. Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, and Fluttershy stood in the middle of the group, surrounded by a large force of police ponies. The herd walked in relative silence, save for the clopping of hooves on dirt.
Twilight looked over at Rainbow Dash, whose expression showed no trace of emotion. Still, Twilight sensed that her friend was troubled. "Are you okay with doing this?" Twilight asked. Rainbow simply nodded. She didn't want her friends to know it, but right now it was taking all her strength to keep going, and not start panicking. After all, she was about to face her tormentor, the person who had destroyed her life. She had a right to be afraid.
The group rounded the corner, and saw the rock farm just ahead. Rainbow Dash hesitated at the sight, knowing that somewhere in there was Pinkie Pie. Applejack came up and put a leg on the rainbow pegasus' shoulder. The two looked at each other, and despite no words being spoken, Rainbow Dash understood, and was comforted by the move. Taking a deep breath, she started moving forward again.
Pie Rock Farm
Meanwhile
Rarity lay in wait in the corner of her cell, taking deep breaths to calm herself. She listened carefully, for what she was about to do called for perfect timing. She knew that if her plot failed, Pinkie Pie would surely kill her like all of her other victims. A loud bang alerted her to someone approaching, and her muscles tensed in anticipation. The cell door swung open, and Pinkie Pie entered, bouncing and smiling like nothing was wrong.
"Hey there Rarity!" Pinkie said happily. "Guess what!" Rarity glanced up at her captor. "What?" she said coldly. Pinkie let out a huge laugh. "We get to go have fun now! All you have to do first is eat this cupcake so you have some energy. After all, breakfast was a long time ago!" Pinkie tossed a single cupcake over to Rarity, who picked it up and looked at it. She wondered what unfortunate pony was baked into the "treat", and vowed to try and avenge them. Rarity then took a big bite of the cupcake with no more thought on it.
Looking up, Rarity saw Pinkie staring at her excitedly, waiting for the drug to take effect. Let's hope you're a better actress than flier Rarity thought, before allowing the cupcake to drop from her hoof to the ground, closing her eyes, and letting her head drop back onto the concrete floor. Listening closely, Rarity heard Pinkie squeal with excitement, then start walking towards her supposedly subdued victim. As soon as Rarity felt Pinkie touch her, she opened her eyes, grabbed Pinkie's front left leg, and smashed her hoof against Pinkie's face.
The pink pony flew back, stunned. Rarity bolted to her feet and charged at Pinkie, letting loose a very un-Rarity like war cry. "DIE
Pinkie, not one to let a friend get away, especially so close to play time, gave chase. The two ponies flew up the stares, Rarity fueled by adrenaline and her survival instinct, Pinkie by her urge to kill. Rarity made it halfway up before Pinkie grabbed her leg, and slammed her down against the stairs. Rarity twisted, and delivered a hard kick to Pinkie Pie's gut, forcing her to let go of Rarity's leg. Rarity jumped back to her feet and continued up the stairs, knowing that Pinkie Pie was right behind her.
Rarity rounded a turn, and saw that the stairs lead straight up to a doorway from that point on. She saw natural light streaking in from under the door, and smelled fresh air. Grinning at being so close to freedom, Rarity ran as fast as she could, and jumped at it. Her body slammed against the wooden doorframe and bounced off. Oh
The force of the impact stunned Rarity, and gave Pinkie the opportunity she needed. Grabbing Rarity's head, Pinkie began to repeatedly slam it against the door, trying to knock Rarity into unconsciousness. Rarity lashed out with a right hook that caught Pinkie on the chin, knocking her back a bit. Rarity then raised her knees sharply, catching Pinkie in the back and launching her forward face first into the wooden door. Rarity quickly got out from underneath Pinkie, who was rubbing her face in pain. Glancing over, she saw Rarity looking around wildly for another way out, while paying very little attention to Pinkie.
Pinkie shot at Rarity, and tackled her down the stairs. The two tumbled for a short while, before finally coming to a halt a third of the way down. Pinkie, confused by the fall, looked around quickly and realized that she had come out in front of Rarity, and now blocked the path between her and the door. Rarity, figuring this out too, swung at Pinkie Pie, but missed. Pinkie delivered a sharp kick to Rarity's midsection, which yielded a satisfying crack.
"Ahhh!" Rarity yelled in pain, dropping to her knees. She knew that last kick had broken a rib or two, and her back left leg had gotten hurt during their fall. Pinkie Pie took delight in her victims pain, saying "Oooh see, this is so much fun! Aren't you having fun Rarity?"
Rarity looked up at Pinkie Pie, and saw that the pony was grinning hysterically, even with blood dripping down her face. "What happened to you Pinkie?" Rarity panted. "You were one of the best ponies I ever knew. How did this happen to you?" Pinkie just shrugged. "What do you mean Rarity, am I not one of the best ponies you know anymore? Oooh, maybe when we start playing you'll change your mind!"
Pinkie Pie leaned over and grabbed Rarity by the mane, pulling her up on her back two legs, and then threw her over the rail of the stairs in one final attempt to beat her down. Rarity however, quickly realized this, and as she went over, she grabbed a hold of Pinkie Pie's arm, and wrapped her own arm around the railing. Pinkie tried to stop, but Rarity's momentum plus her own was too much. With a surprised yelp, Pinkamena Diane Pie flew over the rail of the spiral stairs, and fell into the dark abyss below.
Outside
The police team, along with Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, and Applejack, searched the rock farm from top to bottom, looking for any clues on where Pinkie Pie or Rarity were. So far, they had none. Rainbow Dash sat on a log in front of an old bookshelf tired from the long search with no results. Fluttershy came up and sat beside the disheartened pony in an attempt to comfort her. "Don't worry Rainbow Dash" Fluttershy said softly. "I'm sure Rarity is alright" Rainbow Dash was about to respond, but a large bang from the bookshelf behind them. Fluttershy and Rainbow, startled, leapt to their feet and stared at the furniture in shock.
"Did you hear that?" Rainbow Dash asked. "Yes" was Flutterhsy's reply. Another loud bang sounded from the bookshelf, followed by a rather loud "HEEELP!" Both Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy had heard that voice before.
"Rarity!" They exclaimed, and immediately set about on finding a way to open the bookshelf. The two pulled books out left and right looking for a door handle or lever.
"Found it!" Rainbow Dash yelled excitedly, having yanked a book called Partying for Dummies from the shelf and discovering the lever behind it. "Stand back, Rarity!" Rainbow yelled. At this point the rest of the group had joined Rainbow and Fluttershy, and they all held a collective breath as Rainbow pulled the lever.
The bookshelf opened towards the group, revealing a beaten and broken Rarity, who hobbled out and was immediately swarmed by her friends in a hug. Unable to contain it any longer, Rarity burst into tears. "Pinkie's still down there!" She sobbed. "I don't know if she's alive or dead, but she's still there!"
Princess Celestia approached the group of friends at this news. "Excuse me, but I believe I need to go see Pinkie." Rainbow Dash shot up at this. "If you're going down there, then so am I" Twilight joined her friend, standing up and saying "As am I"
The princess quickly glanced at the two ponies, before saying "Alright, but you two only." The group walked to the front of the staircase, and stared down into Pinkie's lair. "Stay close to me, and whatever I tell you to do, do it." Princess Celestia said. "Understood?" Twilight and Rainbow nodded. Princess Celestia sighed. "Then let's go"
Bottom of the Staircase
Pinkie Pie's head hurt. Her arms hurt, her body hurt, in general, everything hurt. The thing that hurt the most, however, was her back right leg. Looking up, she saw that it had caught on a loose stair, and halted her fall. Groaning, Pinkie pulled herself up on top of the stairs, and tested out her leg. She nearly cried when she put it down on the ground. Definitely broken she thought to herself. "Why would Rarity do such a thing to me?" Pinkie asked out loud. She never cared about you Pinkie the voice answered back. That's why you shouldn't have let her get away. That's why you shouldn't have let Rainbow Dash get away. They'll both tell lies about you. "But, they're my friends! They wouldn't do that!" They're not your friends, they are the enemy!
Pinkie's conversation with herself was interrupted by the sound of hooves on steel. Someone's coming! The voice said. Quick, get in position! You must deal with them! Pinkie smiled. "Do I get to play with them?" Yes. "Ooh goody!" Pinkie Pie turned, and was about to go hide when she heard the ponies speak. She recognized the voices. Hey, it's Twilight, Rainbow Dash, aaanndd….Princess Celestia! She thought. Ooh, I can play with my friends, and with a princess! I've never played with a princess before! Despite her bad leg, Pinkie began to skip as she went looking for a good place to hide.
Meanwhile
"Quiet" Princess Celestia said sharply to Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, who had been talking to each other. The two smaller ponies obeyed. Twilight Sparkle walked beside the princess, and saw that she was breathing a bit faster than usual. If Princess Celestia is nervous Twilight thought, we could be in some serious trouble. The trio finally arrived at the bottom of the stairs, and saw a large cell directly in front of them, and a long, dark hallway to their right. Before anypony was able to decide which way to go, what little light the group had suddenly went out.
Rainbow Dash heard a series of clicks and what sounded like large machinery, then nothing. No Twilight, no Princess Celestia, nothing. "Hello?" Rainbow called out. "Twilight? Princess?" All of a sudden, a light popped on. This one was brighter than the previous one, and cast an eerie glow on the walls of the hallway. Twilight and Princess Celestia were gone, replaced by one pony: Pinkie. Rainbow Dash stared at Pinkie Pie. This was the first time either of them had seen each other since that fateful night in Sugarcube Corner.
Rainbow, who was now in full panic mode, began to back away from Pinkie, who was smiling manically. Finish it! The voices were telling her. Make her pay for the lies! Pinkie began to walk towards Rainbow, still smiling. "You know, Rainbow, we never finished playing before we were so rudely interrupted by Applejack! Well don't worry, we won't get interrupted this time!"
Rainbow Dash continued to back up, until eventually she was in the large cell. Pinkie Pie followed her in, and closed the gate behind her. Realizing she was trapped, Rainbow looked directly at Pinkie Pie, and said. "Pinkie Pie? I don't what led you to do these.." Rainbow Dash hesitated. "These horrible things, but it can end here! Just come quietly, and we can help you!"
Pinkie just laughed. "Help! I don't need help silly! You're really acting weird Dashie! Now no more talking, let's play!" Pinkie Pie held up a knife that she had been holding behind her back, and slashed at Rainbow, cutting her at the knee. Rainbow Dash yelled in pain, before another slash cut her deeply at the stomach.
"Remember Dash! I didn't lie when I said you could watch the harvest!" Rainbow Dash looked down and saw large amounts of blood leaking from her knee and stomach. At that moment, Twilight and Princess Celestia appeared from behind gate, both covered in blood. Pinkie quickly grabbed Rainbow Dash and held the knife against her neck, using her as a hostage. "Oooh you guys are good! I thought you'd never get out of those traps!"
Princess Celestia stared at Pinkie Pie. "Pinkie, drop the knife right now, and this can all end." Pinkie laughed. ":Why would I drop the knife, especially since they want me to hold it so badly?"
Rainbow Dash, Twilight, and Princess Celestia all blinked in confusion. "Who? Who wants you to hold the knife?" Princess Celestia asked. Again, Pinkie laughed. "Whaddya mean who? You people are silly!" "Pinkie, no one besides us is here!" Rainbow Dash yelled. "It's just you, me, Twilight and the princess, that's all!" This time, it was Pinkie's turn for confusion. Lies the voices said. Cut her throat so she ay tell no more lies! Pinkie smiled. "See, listen. They're talking!"
Twilight and the Princess looked at each other, confused. "Pinkie, there is no one talking right now besides me. What ever you are hearing, it isn't real!" Pinkie shook her head. She was really starting to get confused at this whole situation. Rainbow Dash, feeling that they were finally starting to break through to Pinkie, spoke up again. "Pinkie, what ever you've been hearing, it isn't real! We're friends remember!" Pinkie muttered a small yes as an answer. "Well, if we're friends, why are you trying to kill me?"
Pinkie was stunned. "Kill you? I wasn't trying to kill you, I was just trying to play with you! They said you weren't getting hurt. That you, and everyone else, was fine…" Pinkie began to feel something that she hadn't felt in a long time, not since the day she had thought her friends didn't want to be her friends anymore. The feeling seemed familiar, and, as it rose throughout her body, she recognized it. It was her old self, her conscience, undisturbed by the voices she heard. Do it! The voices screamed! "No!" Pinkie yelled aloud. Throwing Rainbow Dash to the ground, Pinkie Pie raised the knife, and, while her friends watched in horror, plunged it into her own chest.
Pinkie Pie sank to her knees, smiling at the sharp knife protruding from her abdomen. For the first time in a long time, her mind was silent. She turned to Rainbow Dash, and whispered, "I'm sorry" before slipping away into blackness.