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I could've saved you.
Android18 (2013-07-29 04:26:00)GodHydrazzzzzz!
Okayz, I will. But my old stories sucked ass, because I didn't have good plots or writing skills.
I'm sorry.
MeNobody14 (2013-07-29 14:03:51)^Lawl. He needs to explain that, otherwise it isn't scary. Also, he uses to much language.
It's time for review, kiddo!
Android18 (2013-07-29 14:29:06)^ I'm a girl. And how the hell did I use too much language.
I actually tried extremely hard to make this story the best I could, and top my other bad stories, but looks like I failed. Like always.
I'm sorry.
Android18 (2013-07-29 14:39:23)But screw it. Closed.
And bastard isn't a bad word. I only overused "Hell". -Sigh-
2013-07-29 21:41:33
I'm sorry.
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It's my parent's anniversary, so I'm home alone. Me and my friend usually talk on MSN about Radom whiz, but she wasn't online today, so I decided to get on anyway.
Then I got a strange message from someone I had no idea who the hell it was.
Anonymous said: Hello.
You said: Hello, I guess..
Anonymous said: I can save you...
You said: How, I'm not in any danger...
Anonymous said: Just listen to me, you are in trouble.
You said: Bullcrap, no I'm not. I don't have a clue what you're talking about.
Anonymous said: Get out of your house, now.
What was this? Is this some sort of sick joke?
You said: Who the hell do you think you are, telling me to get out of MY house, bastard.
Anonymous said: Hurry, before it's too late. Time is running out.
You said: Leave me alone, stalker.
Just as I was about to log out, this person sent me one more message. Just as I was about to close my laptop.
Anonymous said: Please..before it's too late.
You said: How can you help me though, please tell me..!
There was an awkward pause between us. About for 2 minutes. Then they finally replied.
Anonymous said: I'm sorry..I can't help you anymore..
You said: W-wait..!!
Anonymous said: Goodbye. Rest in peace, Rei.
Just as I was about to type something, everything started to fade to black, as I collapsed suddenly.
-2 days later on the news-..
News: A 15 year old girl all of a sudden collapsed, while chatting with an anonymous person. Her unfinished sentence said: "But I'm scared, please tell me what's" and that's all that was left. No evidence of murder were found. The only evidence was the last message from Anonymous, that said:
"Only if you listened to me.."
"I could have saved you..."