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I could've saved you.
Started by Android18
(2013-07-29 04:06:03)
Android18 (2013-07-29 04:06:03)
It's my parent's anniversary, so I'm home alone. Me and my friend usually talk on MSN about Radom whiz, but she wasn't online today, so I decided to get on anyway.

Then I got a strange message from someone I had no idea who the hell it was.

Anonymous said: Hello.

You said: Hello, I guess..

Anonymous said: I can save you...

You said: How, I'm not in any danger...

Anonymous said: Just listen to me, you are in trouble.

You said: Bullcrap, no I'm not. I don't have a clue what you're talking about.

Anonymous said: Get out of your house, now.

What was this? Is this some sort of sick joke?

You said: Who the hell do you think you are, telling me to get out of MY house, bastard.

Anonymous said: Hurry, before it's too late. Time is running out.

You said: Leave me alone, stalker.

Just as I was about to log out, this person sent me one more message. Just as I was about to close my laptop.

Anonymous said: Please..before it's too late.

You said: How can you help me though, please tell me..!

There was an awkward pause between us. About for 2 minutes. Then they finally replied.

Anonymous said: I'm sorry..I can't help you anymore..

You said: W-wait..!!

Anonymous said: Goodbye. Rest in peace, Rei.

Just as I was about to type something, everything started to fade to black, as I collapsed suddenly.

-2 days later on the news-..

News: A 15 year old girl all of a sudden collapsed, while chatting with an anonymous person. Her unfinished sentence said: "But I'm scared, please tell me what's" and that's all that was left. No evidence of murder were found. The only evidence was the last message from Anonymous, that said:

"Only if you listened to me.."

"I could have saved you..."
I'm sorry.
Android18 (2013-07-29 04:26:00)
GodHydrazzzzzz!

Okayz, I will. But my old stories sucked ass, because I didn't have good plots or writing skills.
I'm sorry.
MeNobody14 (2013-07-29 14:03:51)
^Lawl. He needs to explain that, otherwise it isn't scary. Also, he uses to much language.
It's time for review, kiddo!
Android18 (2013-07-29 14:29:06)
^ I'm a girl. And how the hell did I use too much language.


I actually tried extremely hard to make this story the best I could, and top my other bad stories, but looks like I failed. Like always.
I'm sorry.
MeNobody14 (2013-07-29 14:39:18)
"B***ard." :l
It's time for review, kiddo!
Android18 (2013-07-29 14:39:23)
But screw it. Closed.

And bastard isn't a bad word. I only overused "Hell". -Sigh-

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2013-07-29 21:41:33

I'm sorry.
 

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