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"A Precious Rainbow 2" Chapter 3 Part 2
Started by jr27
(2013-07-23 15:23:38)
jr27 (2013-07-23 15:23:38)
Ponyville Town Square

3:20

The four ponies ran as fast as their legs could carry them towards the Police Station. Despite the only sound being the clomp of their hooves and the pants of their breath, they were all thinking the same thing. We've got to help Rarity before it's too late! Rainbow Dash led the group, her legs moving so fast they were almost a blur. The speed at which she moved made it feel like she was flying again, something that she had taken for granted. Rainbow Dash smiled, then immediately chastised herself. My friend is in incredible danger, and I'm enjoying myself? Rainbow shook her head, and kept on running.

As the ponies turned the corner, they saw the Police Station straight ahead of them. Each one of them secretly breathed a small sigh of relief at this. With a final burst of speed, the ponies barged through the door of the station, only to come to a sudden and screeching halt at the feet of a large, white pony with Pegasus wings, and a horn.

"Princess Celestia!" Twilight Sparkle stammered. "What are you doing here?" The princess looked down at the group of panting ponies, and they all noticed the large dark circles under her eyes. "I heard about your friend Rarity. I'm sorry. To answer your question Twilight, I am leading the search party to help find Rarity, and, with any luck, Pinkie as well so we may end this terrible nightmare. "

Applejack gave the princess a small smile. "Aw thanks princess, we sure do appreciate the help." The other ponies gave also noised approval. Princess Celestia smiled, but her expression quickly changed. "There is one condition however. As much as I know you want to help, you cannot be a part of the search in any way."

Twilight's mouth dropped open, as did just about everyone else's. "What? But Princess, Rarity is our friend, we have to help!" This time, the noise of approval was more of an angry cheer.

The princess looked down. "Yes, Rarity is your friend, but so was Pinkie. If any of you would happen to find Pinkie, I don't trust that you'd have what it takes to…to do what is necessary."

"But princess-" " No. My mind is made up. Return home at once." The four ponies saw that there would be no persuading this case, so they turned and began the trip home. Twilight felt a hoof on her shoulder, so she turned and saw the princess beckoning her aside. Leaning in close, the Princess whispered "Stay close to Rainbow Dash. I fear Pinkie may try and finish what she started." And with that, the princess whirled around, and walked away, leaving Twilight alone, and suddenly, very, very afraid.

Whereabouts Unknown

Rarity couldn't see. She couldn't hear, couldn't move, and couldn't even fell anything, except for the cold concrete floor. Am I dead? She wondered. Well if this is heaven it certainly could use some work. A loud bang, followed by the sound of approaching footsteps, startled her out of her thoughts. Well I guess we can rule out death. "Who's there?" she yelled, however, due to the gag that she had just noticed was in her mouth, her question sounded like nonsense. Great, now my teeth are going to be stained! The footsteps got closer and closer, until the seemed to be right on top of Rarity, at which point they stopped. She felt a pair of hooves grab her, and place upright on her knees. Through her blindfold she could make out the shape of a pony with a poofy mane, but nothing more. The mysterious figure grabbed Rarity's head, lowered her gag, and held a bowl filled with an unknown liquid to her mouth. The moment the liquid touched her lips she realized it was water, and she was also incredibly thirsty.

Once she had drained the bowl, she was given an odd tasting meal, one that seemed to consist of chicken, bread, and some sort of dessert. Finished with her meal, Rarity strained to see if she could make out anymore of her captor, however, her blindfold was to thick. All she could see was the figure pick up the bowls, and walk to the doorway.

"Hey" Rarity shouted as loud as she could. "You forgot to put my gag back on. If your going to hold me captive at least do it correctly" To Rarity's surprise, the figure stopped, turned, and walked right up to Rarity, who fell back in fear. Two hooves reached out and gently untied Rarity's blindfold. Rarity blinked, the light hurting her dark accustomed eyes. "Now just who do you think you-" Rarity stopped in mid sentence as her captor became visible. "No" Rarity whispered. "No No No NO NO!"

Pinky Pie smiled. "Hi Rarity! I'm so happy to see you, it's been AGES since we last hung out or did anything like that!" Pinky noticed her friends frightened stare. "Oh Rarity, I know I haven't been taking care of my mane like you told me. Maybe you could do it for me!" Rarity just stared at Pinky. "You really are insane aren't you Pinky?" Pinky laughed in her usual high voice giggle. "Duh, I'm crazy about being able to talk to you and all my old friends again!" Rarity cringed, and then opened her mouth to say something brave when Pinky Pie spun around and went "Huh?" Rarity stopped. Pinky continued to look around, until she seemed to have found what, or who she was looking for. "Oh it's just you! You scared me silly!"

Rarity couldn't believe what she was seeing. "Pinky? No one else is here." Pinky acted as if she didn't hear Rarity, and continued her conversation with the air. "Mmmhmm! Oohh I almost forgot, thanks for reminding me!" she said excitedly. "Hey Rarity, how's Rainbow Dash? Oooh did she get my gift? You have no idea how hard it was to make those cupcakes! You know, for someponies who have the last name cake, they sure didn't cook well!" Pinkie Pie laughed at her own joke. "Anyway Rarity, it's bee great seeing ya! Catch you later!"

Pinkie Pie twirled around, and walked out the door, shutting it and turning out the light as she went. Rarity just stared, thinking about what Pinkie Pie had just said. Cupcake…last name cake…Oh god. Rarity turned to her side and threw up violently, then rolled over, and passed out.

Twilight's House

8:00 PM

"Ah don't understand why we can't just go back to the farm!" Applejack complained. Twilight rolled her eyes. "Because AJ, I've got tons of books here with helpful spells, and if Pinkie comes looking for Rainbow Dash, we're going to need all the help we can get." Applejack exhaled forcefully. "Well, then why am I here?" Twilight shot Applejack a look. "Applejack, you've looked after Rainbow Dash since the attack. I really doubt you would leave her now, especially since you two are…well"

Applejack was taken back. "Well what? You think me and Rainbow are together don'tchew?" Twilight grimaced. "Well, you two have been around each other a lot, and Big Macintosh said.." "Big Macintosh don't know what he's talking about" Applejack interrupted. Twilight Sparkle stared at her friend. "So you're telling me that you and Rainbow Dash have absolutely no feelings for each other at all?" Applejack sighed. "Well…I mean I do have feelins for her..and she has em for me. But we ain't gonna do nothin' bout them feelings til this whole Pinkie thing has ended, alright?" Twilight shrugged. "Okay"

Applejack shook her head, then looked over at Spike, who was staring out the window. "You okay there, Sugarcube?" Applejack said. Spike just kept staring out the window, unresponsive. Applejack shot Twilight a concerned look, and both of the walked, and gave the purple dragon a hug. "Don't worry Spike" Twilight said. "They'll find Rarity, I'm sure of it." Spike just kept staring out the window, and thought. Yeah…but will she be alive?

Twilight's Bedroom

8:00 PM.

Rainbow Dash, at that moment, was also staring into the night sky. Her gaze was directed to the stars, the beautiful moon, and all that she missed. She had only flown at night once, and now that she no longer had wings, she wished that she had done it just one more time. "Hey Fluttershy" The forlorn rainbow pegasus asked. "How many times do you fly a day?" Fluttershy quietly walked over to Rainbow Dash. "Oh, only once or twice. I prefer the ground anyway, it's so much more peaceful, and most of my animals live on the ground." Rainbow Dash just sighed, and put her head down. "Look at Fluttershy. Pinkie Pie has Rarity, and all I'm concerned about is flying!" Fluttershy awkwardly put a leg around Rainbow Dash. "Well, you had wings all your life, it take a while to get used to not having them..I guess." Rainbow Dash shook her head. "Its not that I'm not used to having them, I mean swimming really helped, it's just that today, when we were running to the police station. That was the fastest I've gone since I had my wings, and….the feeling of that speed kinda reminded me about flying."

Fluttershy didn't really know what to say. After all, she still had her wings, and yet she didn't really like flying. She settled for "Well, like I said, you'd flown your entire life and then all of a sudden you couldn't. You're bound to get reminded of flight by some things." Rainbow just shrugged. "I guess I just want to get up off the ground again."

That's when Fluttershy got an idea. A scary idea, yes, but if it help Rainbow Dash, then she'd do it. "Hey, Rainbow Dash" Fluttershy said nervously. "Would you like it if you flew with me?" Rainbow Dash looked over at Fluttershy. "'Shy, I'm really touched, but I doubt you could lift me." "Oh, I think I could. There was a heavy log blocking off the flow of the stream a few days ago, and I lifted it just fine!" Rainbow Dash looked at Fluttershy. "I don't know Fluttershy, are you sure?" Fluttershy nodded. "Okay, let's do it."

Ponyville Pastures

8:30 PM

Rainbow Dash stared up into the night sky in wonderment. She couldn't believe she was doing this, especially in a time such as now, but something told her it felt right. Fluttershy approached from behind her. "Are you ready?" She asked. Rainbow Dash nodded. Fluttershy bent down, grabbed the end of the rope that was tied to Rainbow Dash, and tied it to herself. "Okay Rainbow, here we go!" Fluttershy flapped her wings, and gently, the two ponies rose. Rainbow Dash gazed around in awe as the ground slipped away, and she was surrounded by Luna's night. The two ponies slowly flew around all of Ponyville, around the mountain, and over the Everfree Forest. Rainbow Dash, to in love with having the feeling of flying again, never noticed the strain of Fluttershy's face as she flew, never noticed the sweat dripping off her body, or the sharp intakes of her breaths. When the two finally touched down again in the pastures, Flutterhsy was about ready to pass out. Between large breaths, Fluttershy asked "Rainbow? You okay?" Rainbow Dash didn't respond. She just continued to face away from Fluttershy, staring into the night sky. When she finally did turn around, her eyes were full of tears. Fluttershy, who had caught her breath by then, seemed stunned. "Oh, did I do something wrong? I'm sorry, I didn't mean to-" Rainbow Dash interrupted her. "Fluttershy.." "Yes Rainbow?" "Thank you" As Rainbow Dash walked up to her friend and embraced her, Fluttershy realized that those tears were tears of joy, and she hugged Dash back.

Far above them, Luna was patrolling her night skies, and saw the two hugging ponies. She smiled. Even in dark times such as these, there is still room for happiness she thought, then went on her way.

MeNobody14 (2013-07-23 16:17:31)
Uh-oh.. I think I'm being converted into a brony! D:

Anyways, I don't want to read anymore unless Pinkie becomes normal in the end.
It's time for review, kiddo!
ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 17:50:14)
Shouldn't this all be in the same thread?
bite za dusto
MeNobody14 (2013-07-23 17:57:07)
^Actually, I think it's long enough to pass.
It's time for review, kiddo!
ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 18:17:05)
^ Very well. MUSKATEER CONNORRONNOC, AWAY!
bite za dusto
jr27 (2013-07-23 23:25:05)
Spoiler: Pinkie dies in the end.
MeNobody14 (2013-07-24 00:03:08)
Fanfictions can't kill off characters.

Unless it's a Star-Trek redshirt.
It's time for review, kiddo!
jr27 (2013-07-25 17:19:57)


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