simmonsa1851 (2013-07-23 05:19:40)

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CLOSE REQUEST

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 06:13:16)

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Grammar: BAD
Spelling: BAD
My understanding of it: TERRIBLE
Originality: BAD

Overall total: 3/10= BAD

ConnorRonnoc's Comment:
This story made no sense whatsoever. A sentence can not be just four words. There's no plot and I think you should go read a real book or read some good Creepypastas and try doing it like they did. This does NOT mean you steal their ideas.

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-07-23 13:14:00

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 06:15:59)

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^ Wait what did you just type? I'm not trying to be horrible, but I don't understand it.

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