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Super_~_Junior. (2013-05-22 00:05:09)This story is very random ^ .3.
2013-05-22 07:05:29
MeNobody14 (2013-05-22 00:36:39)#1 "...Snowly walked.."
#2 "...Steated in.."
#3 "...Coverd in.."
#4 "...Okay?."
#5 "...Feared the woman god.."
#6 "...own left arms.."
^Seriously? Six full mistakes? You need to type slower and proofread it. :l
It's time for review, kiddo!
Super_~_Junior. (2013-05-23 21:45:55)
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Chapter 1. Beginning
I heard sounds of loud crying from the up stares room.. As I snowly walked up the stairs... I slowly opened the door to find a woman steating in a chair coverd in blood.. As I walked towards her she started to laugh, I quietly and softly said " Are you okay?." she looked at me smiling, Her teeth dripping with blood, Her eyes as blue as can be, She slowly started to move towards me, I stumbled and fall backwards, The woman laughed and smiled.. I feared the woman god knows who she was or what she was doing.. She grabbed a knife from the floor, As I got up. She cut her own left arms and drank her own blood, As she was laughing and crying, I helplessly watch her I couldn't move I felt frozen, As she cut her own throat, Blood was all over the floor and the wall, I fell to the floor in confusion.
Chapter 2. Coming soon.