ccisawesome (2013-05-03 13:43:18)

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The sun grows light within the sky, the moon grows bright within the night.The sun is hot the moon is cold, the light grows in the midnight sky, the moon lives and the sun dies

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2013-05-03 20:46:48

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ccisawesome (2013-05-03 13:44:26)

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my first poem so go easy and tell me what to improve on

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-04 19:57:44)

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Length. Thats all I'm asking. And spacing.

QUESTION: Do you know the rules of poetry?

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ccisawesome (2013-05-04 23:57:38)

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some of the rules, and ya its a little short

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