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Sacred -Chapter one: The soul of the courageous.
RainbowNinja (2012-07-18 09:52:48)I give it, a solid. 8.
Skittles, taste the rainbow.
Mario Kart, ride the rainbow.
Super Mario Galaxy, BE the rainbow.
Mario Kart, ride the rainbow.
Super Mario Galaxy, BE the rainbow.
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The story starts at a point where the reader doesn't know what
sort of situation the character is. When I read the story, I saw words where kinda in the wrong order; ''for the light coming from underneath the door infront of me''. It would be more suitable to write; ''for the light coming from the door underneath, in front of me.'' I got easily distracted, so I'd give it a 7.