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To Fix The Boulevard Prologue.
Tyanna (2012-07-10 01:31:43)Thanks
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Love [check], Life[Not yet] and the pursuit of happiness[Check c:].
kblackeagle (2012-07-10 01:35:31)My feedback: How can the creature make her soul go into the past as a newborn? Either than that, it's worth continuing.
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It all starts off In San Francisco, CA
Xandrianna, a 15 Year old girl lives alone in an abandoned house. She was kicked out by her parents at the Age of 9, and she was forced to supply herself with food, clothing, and a roof over her head. All her other relatives had either passed away or died in the 9/11 plane crash.
Xandrianna, liking to be called Xandra, was closed away from the world. She felt as f she had nothing to live for. And she explores the streets one day she get's Kidnapped by an Intriguing creature. The Next day she wakes up, Xandrianna is a newborn baby and she's filled with the knowledge since the abduction. Can Xandrianna Fight the past to Change her present.
Just Comment If the Story Should continue...
Love [check], Life[Not yet] and the pursuit of happiness[Check c:].