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Started by AntiChrist
(2014-09-28 20:45:53)
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-14 20:55:16)
Clearly Fire and Water can mix. What is Volcanion?
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little5 (2014-10-14 22:23:30)
Oh, I see now.
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-16 02:37:13)
Dang no last arch 1 chapter today.
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little5 (2014-10-16 10:25:27)
Aw.
AntiChrist (2014-10-16 20:19:28)
The weekend has started. The last chapter will be posted today or tonight.

Edit: here it is

Chapter 12:


In the underground training area below the police station, Meia was sprinting, jumping and climbing her way through an obstacle course and back over and over. She had bags under her eyes and loads of sweat soaking her fur. She fumbled to the side of the room and puked all over the ground.

Suddenly, victor walked into the room and looked at Dedenne.

"Aren't you pushing her a bit hard?"

Asked victor

"It's going to take loads of training for her to even merely escape that damn golurk. Did you hear who he killed recently?"

Said Dedenne. Meia, now laying down in pain watched as Dedenne walked over to victor, said something quietly to him, and victor spat his tea all over the floor.

"What's worse is that from what I've been told, she wasn't even able to put a scratch on him. There's no telling weather or not that detail is exaggerated though."

Continued Dedenne. Meia slowly started to get up. Her legs were wobbling like crazy. Dedenne used heal pulse, restoring Meias' energy completely. She continued running through the obstacle course wuthout saying anything.

"She sure doesn't talk much..."

Said Victor


A couple of weeks had gone by since the dawn stone was discovered. Not long after that, a damp rock and pure incense were found. All three items were kept in dedennes office, but suddenly, Carlos11 came. He told victor that a bunch of items were appearing everywhere at random. They weren't super easy to find, but he noticed that all the items he found were all 300 meters away from each other. People in the police force went outside the walls to confirm this and realized that carlos11 was right.

Dedenne decided not to make pokemon items illegal in the state, since there would be way too much protesting.

During those few peaceful weeks, Dedenne had set up a few tournaments to determine the strength of everyone in his police force and divide everyone into teirs.


On tier one, Dedenne, Victor and a hypno name Lance were the only undefeated pokemon and were place on that tier.

Tier two was Dimentia, Cr1tikal, Fluxer, pokemonbro and a pichu who had recently arrived at the state who was already powerful even though he decided not to evolve yet.

Everyone else was put on tier three. I was in there, since I lost to a raticate in the forst round of the first tournament, which didn't suprise me since just like the time we dealt with the blaziken and his team, every job I went on resulted in me getting my ass kicked and everyone saving me. On one job I went on that involved going outside the walls, I found a small, sphere shaped stone. It was the stone a trainer needed to mega evolve their pokemon. I had no use for it so I gave it to Cr1tikal, who wanted to mega evolve really badly. Now all he had to do was find a trainer and a metagrossite. Both were very unlikely to happen though.

Everything was going smoothly in the state. People started being more obedient, no prison braks occured, still no sign of Bruce and more people were brought in the state and given a home. Since most problems inside the walls were being easily resolved now, Dedenne announced that we would be helping people outside the walls.

Outside the walls where we were safe, it was not safe for anyone who wasn't powerful. People were still being killed all around the world, homes destroyed, still no laws being created and enforced and overall, no safety. There could be no government in control because of the type advantages. The grass type were killing the water, rock and ground types, the fire types were killing them and the water types were killing the fire types. This made it impossible for one person to be in control, no matter how strong they were.

It was now a world where the strategic conquered the strong. Still, it needed help. Dedenne raised awareness of what was happening outside the safety of the state and more people decided to join the police force, which eventually became known as a "military".

The state saved the lives of many people around the world. Most people who came to the state for help never really had a challenging problem for Dedenne and his army, until one day an abra elgiem showed up.

( end of arch one )
















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2014-10-16 21:14:06

AntiChrist (2014-10-16 23:48:05)
Wait, it isn't the weekend. It's Thursday . Close enough. Anyway, since I'm about to post the second arch, this one will be closed.
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