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Slink365 (2012-07-10 01:15:20)Its not the best but i won 1st place in the region of Massachusetts with it!
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Slink365 (2012-07-10 01:19:55)Its not good!
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Tyanna (2012-07-10 01:21:21)I like it. It's honest, and that's what poems should be.
Love [check], Life[Not yet] and the pursuit of happiness[Check c:].
Slink365 (2012-07-10 15:03:56)Awww thankss!
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Slink365 (2012-07-11 20:20:08)True Beauty<3
Beauty isnt about what u look like or the Way u smile. Its about the way u look at the way u think and the way u act. Life isnt really about the way u look its about the way u act and thats what Beauty<3 truly is. You see someone uve never met before and they dnt have the best clothes and arent the prettiest thing well just get to know them and ull know yet one thing inner beauty is a true true thing<3 Written By Alysia<3
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Slink365 (2012-07-12 13:57:07)That one wasnt good at all i just made that one offhe top o of tf my head
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Slink365 (2012-07-18 19:43:31)Can I Take Your Pain?
I hear these crazy stories of people always hurting Not knowing what to do i stupidly ask "What can i do" They reply with "Idk" I say "Can i take your pain away cause thats all i know how to do" They say "Thats impossible that cannot be true" I say "I dont believe in impossible so the real question is how cant it be true" They say "I wouldnt be able to live with myself if it wasnt for u so stop dreaming i cant let u thru i cant let u hurt the way i do" I say "Id smile thru the pain knowing it was for u and i cry cause u hurt now. The pain may be bad but it doesnt hurt as bad as seeing u beat so bad. I know it sounds crazy but all i dream about is caring for people so tell me to stop dreaming and my light will stop beaming. so can I" "Can u what" "Can i take your Pain Away?" By: Alysia Batallas<3
2012-07-18 19:51:03
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Slink365 (2012-08-13 18:32:17)If You Ever Leave Me!<3
If you ever leave me remember these things: You give me hope to be strong when i am weak. You made me smile when no one else could. You gave me hope in general! I know this wont stop you but one thing is you were the most important person in my life. I smiled when i heard your name and I cried when we werent O. I was upset when I havent seen u in a long time. But remember the memories we shared, The times we cried and the times we felt lied to together. Without u i will feel unwanted and dead...I think without u id die and smile cause one day ill see you again and have u as a friend.Until then ill miss u...over and over again
Theeee Enddd!
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Fastcar800 (2012-08-19 22:08:36)Slink, these poems are just beautiful! You have a gift!
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Apple: Insignificant Race
Apple: Insignificant Race
Slink365 (2012-08-22 03:20:32)Awwww thankksss!
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Slink365 (2012-08-22 16:37:25)This crazy night....
I lie awake in bed last night thinking and wondering how? Pondering all these questions why the room was spinning and how? All these scenes replaying. Scouting my surroundings like an Owl in a tree, Thinking to myself is someone else here other than me? Scared as can be holding my dog tight. Hearing these noises and showing quite a fright. On this late night i cry to myself over and over again "please no, please no, no one is in here" My eyes shut tight everyone lie in bed this night, House quiet as a mouse. Not one little creek in our cherry red floor. Just the sound of the wind blowing, for fall was beginning to start. Silent rain drops hitting the roof silently. Curled up on the couch still holding my dog tight, light beaming from our laundry room light. Heart pounding, tears forming, everything wasnt right yet, Confidence struck me i got up holding my dog tighter, heart beat growing faster, eyes now open, little by little inch by inch making my way around our little house scared as can be. walking every inch....finding nothing for what i was scared of was really me
By: Alysia Batallas<3
2012-08-22 16:39:45
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Slink365 (2012-09-18 21:38:35)other ppl i dnt know if they do i always fall in thr traps of lies and hide behind a disguise of the person im not and i hide the thots tht lie deep inside and cry my heart out at night because the disguise im hidden behind is not to be defined as the real me i mean they say they love me and i believe them the first time but when it comes out so many times i feel like its just them dicieveing me and pulling me deep inside-Off the top of my head what i think</3
"Strange People, Wierd World, Kind Words, Wierd sayings.;P, That's life and this is our world"
By Alysia Batallas
me!(:
By Alysia Batallas
Fastcar800 (2012-09-18 22:59:47)These poems are so sweet
Samsung: Master Race
Apple: Insignificant Race
Apple: Insignificant Race
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A peaceful world would be nothing like the world I see in front of me
There would be no worry about what’s going to happen to me
By doing things as a community we make things available to the
Community. Graffiti washes, car washes, etc.
That’s what I could do as part of the community.
As an individual in this world I see in front of me
There I stand and see chaos right in front of me I stop it, it’s like the whole world froze
And it’s nothing but me stopping what I see right in front of me
I close my eyes
The vision I see is nothing like what is in front of me
There are people laughing, having a good time, not worrying
It’s like I just had the weight of the world lifted off of me
That’s what I as an individual envision as a more peaceful world unlike the
One I see in front of me
As a student I close my eyes and see students
Hugging and getting along it’s like they finally understand each other, unlike me
I seem clueless, unwanted in the real world but here it’s like I’m wanted, understood
And, most of all, loved I say to myself this is what I want the world to be like; I can help
People and listen to their problems that’s what I can do to help
The world in front of me
As a family member, I can love my family
Listen to their mistakes and then another vision comes to me
I see family members getting along and not arguing it’s like the whole worlds
Changed: family loving each other, families not having to separate and
Most of all children being loved. You wouldn’t worry about
The kids in school that seem like they’re hiding something about the
Family they live with they share secrets, not afraid to be judged by their loved ones. It’s like they
Finally feel free they can spread their wings and fly; let their families know what’s going on
I can help this by letting each member of my family spread their wings, let them talk let them not be
Judged, help them when they are let down by one of the people in their family
I can let them be free, let them talk to me like it doesn’t matter and tell them I will be
Here: that’s what I envision in the world I see in front of me
By Alysia Batallas