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Nutsy (2014-10-02 23:28:40)If you can be a shiny, everybody can.
Honestly, I hate shinies in stories/roleplay. It's so clichéd.
Pokemonbro12 (2014-10-03 00:37:28)Hey AntiChrist instead of writing pokemonbro just write Poke
Die of cancer
AntiChrist (2014-10-03 00:58:35)Chapter 4: (the last "chapter 4" was actually chapter 3)
*flashback*
A little zoroa hatches out of an egg. It's Carlos11. He contemplates what just happened as he watches a pichu walk by. An egg a few feet away from him hatches out a treeko. It's pheonix.
"Wow. I'm totally stoked to be a sceptile! "
Suddenly, Carlos11 evolved into a Zoroark.
"Hey, pheonix, I think we can evolve at will."
Sure enough, pheonix emmidiately evolved twice just by thinking about it. Carlos11 walked towards the huge mansion where robdeprop lived. The door wouldn't open so he used shadow claw on the lock and went inside. Some user outside started yelling at carlos how he couldn't do that or he'd get banned. Carlos ignored him.
As he made his way up to the top floor, there was no sign of robdeprop. There were a hell of a lot of eggs everywhere though. Carlos11 finally made his way into a room with a pool table and a bar in it. This is where SackKing101, Someluigi, and Robdeprop hung out and discussed their plans for the 3dsplaza kingdom. They were the only ones allowed in this room. There were three eggs in the room. Carlos11 inferred that since Rob, SackKing and someluigi were eggs, they must not have been the cause of or even knew about the wave that supposedly turned everyone into pokemon. He originally intended to break into the estate, question the three and lecture them on how terrible of an idea it was to give everyone powers, but instead he picked up the eggs and made his way to the roof. When he got there, he gently set the eggs down and looked over the edge of the building.
He could see the anticipated chaos beginning. He could hear naive children yelling about how this was their chance to start a "revolution" against the moderators. Others with a typical protagonist complex monologueing about how they would stop anyone who tried the kill the moderators, referring to people disagreeing with them as "noobs". Carlos sighed.
"Peasents."
Refusing to waste any time, Carlos pulled out his phone and called a few people. Nobody was answering. They must have still been inside their eggs.
"Am I going to have to protect these eggs by myself?"
Carlos11 said outloud to himself. He stared at the eggs for a while, wondering how he still had everything that he was carrying before he was turned into an egg. He also wondered if everyone already hatched would even be bold enough to attack each other. How little chaos would be started?
What happened next was unreal. Everyone finally seemed to simutaneously snap. The major fighting happened all at once. Every square inch as far as carlos could see became an explosive battlefield.
Crazy bastards even willing to smash eggs for ttheir own amusement swarmed the rooftops in little time at all. The flting types were carlos' main concern. Eventually, he too and the three eggs were being attacked. Carlos kept them safe succesfully for five minutes. Why the hell were these guys taking so long to hatch? Carlos was becomming irritated. He ended up running with the eggs to town square. Meia was there. She tried her best to help. Carlos ended up telling her to go hide rather than get caught up in the huge clusterf*
Carlos only had so much energy. Eventually a huge metal looking thing showed up. Everyone who attacked it seemed to do no damage whatsoever.
"Theres no way this guy has superior defense AND special defense stats..."
Suddenly the pokemon moved more quickly than any carlos had seemed so far, and knocked carlos down. The pokemon was now between carlos11 and the eggs. Carlos was already weak from countless previous battles from protecting the eggs. Everything was happenig so fast. Carlos couldn't process it all. As he struggled to get up, he began to notice the change in atomosphere. Everyone was avoiding the area in which carlos and his fo were. Whoever carlos11 was fighting, he had some sort of significance. His speed, defense, and special defense... they seemed greater than everyone elses. The pokemon looked at the eggs. Meia was the only one who dared to stay in the area. Carlos could hear her hysterically screaming "No". Accepting defeat, carlos11 made the rational decision. He grabbed Meia and ran the hell out of there. He could see the eggs being violently smashed by the unbeatable pokemon in the reflection of Meias eye.
*flashback end*
"Uh... sir. SIR!! Where are you going? What's wrong! "
said FluxerCry to the zoroark. He started to follow, but right as he was about to grab the zoroarks shoulder, a strong force pulled him back. Cr1tical, the metagross was using phycic.
"Don't. You're going to get killed."
Fluxercry hesitated for a while, then listened to metagross and followed him out of the city. They aimlessly walked through the woods until suddenly, Cr1tikal stopped and looked north.
"Whats wrong?" said Fluxer
"Nutsy is near by. Don't ask how I know."
To be continued
little5 (2014-10-03 01:54:55)Nevermind, I want to stay an eevee..
Anyways, this chapter was really interesting. .o. I like it.
carlos11 (2014-10-03 06:22:33)"Some user outside started yelling at Carlos how he couldn't do that or he'd get banned. Carlos igored him."
I like the satirical reference to recent events.
Language is a tool for efficient communication. The internet is a tool for fast communication. Do not defy both intents by posting incoherent writing.
AntiChrist (2014-10-03 20:51:39)Am I getting everyones personalities right? Also, people can be shiny, but it will never be addressed directly in the story.
Nutsy (2014-10-03 21:15:18)For what I can tell, you have Phoenix pretty well. I don't talk to the other people much.
HanShotFirst (2014-10-03 21:37:12)I have yet, in my Gallade state, to interact with anyone.
That sounds about right actually.
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-04 00:58:08)Yeah you got me pretty good.
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AntiChrist (2014-10-04 02:51:42)Chapter 5:
"Victor, Drakkai, have you found anything? "
said Cr1tikal from far away using telepathy
"....Yes. The ones approaching are Ralts, Wigglytuff and Sceptile. I have yet to identify who they are."
Dimentia leaned back in his chair.
"As long as they aren't high level, I don't anticipate those pokemon being a threat, except for sceptile. "
Said Dimentia, also using cr1tikals telepathy to communicate with everyone.
"I could totally take on the ralts and wigglytuff."
said Drakkai.
"Now wait a second. There's still the possability of us dealing with some strategists here. Ralts' teleport, Wigglytuffs attract and maybe swift... then sceptile as the attacker. We can't underestimate them. "
said Victor.
"Teleport huh? Are we prepared for this? "
said Dimentia
"....The best course of action would be to contact dedenne. "
Said Cr1tikal.
It had been two months since everyone had turned into and hatched from eggs. With every city destroyed and no more order or law in the world of 3dsplaza, one safe place managed to be formed. Somewhere way up north on a coast, walls were built that streched around a large valley. There, resources were collected and a small government like system was formed by Victor, a gallade, and six other pokemon. It wasn't perfect, but it was the most (or the only) in control place in 3dsplaza. Its' population was growing rapidly. Not just anybody was allowed in.
Whenever someone approached the walls that led to this place, the phycic types knew about it and took every necessary precaution. This was the plan made by those who formed this state. Occasionally, those who came were not peaceful, but they were defeated and taken into custody.
Word started going around about the safe place, and people started coming. One of the first groups of people to arrive were Pokemonbro, Cr1tikal, Meia, Nutsy and FluxerCry.
Pheonix and AntiChrist, all this time were still under the control of kishy. AntiChrist kept moving things around with his phycic powers, gradually getting stronger. He eventually realized he could use teleport, thus becomming one of the only two moves (including phycic) he used.
Kishy, AntiChrist and Pheonix were now standing in front of the gate. A venemoth hovered over the top of the wall.
"Who goes there?"
said the venemoth. Kishy used attract on it and made him command the toxicroak inside the wall to open the gate. When they went in, they were stopped and interrogated by several different pokemon. They eventually were able to convince the authorities that they were peaceful and were given a cabin to stay in.
There was a tower. This is where Cr1tikal contacted Victor from earlier. From here, everyone watched who was approaching the walls. Cr1tikals office was in there.
Crit1kal sat in hiss office infront of a desk. He was responding to complaints from civilians in this new state who were having problems with jobs, the food supply and whatnot. Cr1tical sighed.
"Running a society sure is complicated. I wonder how this will work out."
Suddenly, Nutsy walked into his office.
"Hey metagross. Any luck finding your mega stone?"
"Nope... I'm starting to think mega stones don't even exist here. How boring. Anyway, did you hear that the Golurk was spotted again at the east volcano?"
"The one with all 6 perfect IVs who killed Robdeprop? How is he all over the place so fast?"
"We still have failed to capture him. He's just unbeatable. "
Meanwhile, carlos11 was standing on top of a mountain, staring at the walls from a distance.
"So this is the place.... "
to be continued
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