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Started by MeNobody14
(2013-05-12 10:56:31)
TheEpicOne (2013-05-20 14:39:32)
its ok continue
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MeNobody14 (2013-05-20 14:50:35)
I'll continue it tomorrow.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-21 02:32:02)
^Not gonna happen.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-21 20:45:13)
I was lead through a dark, narrow passageway. "Are we there yet?" I asked. Neither of the two kidnappers answered. It felt like hours, when in reality, it was only about ten minutes. Finally, there was a light, and a room, and a chair, and a rope. "Hey!" I protested as they pushed me into the chair. "What's going on?!" I could finally see the faces of the kidnappers. The boy had blonde hair, brown eyes, and freckles. The girl had brown hair, blue eyes, and freckles. The girl looked to be about fourteen, whereas the boy only looked about eleven. "We are here to rescue you!" The boy blurted out. I was confused. I didn't need rescuing, did I? And besides, I felt more like a hostage than anything. "Rescue me?" I asked. "Yeah.. You belong in the dream dimension! Not here!" The boy said. "Cason! Shut up!" The girl said. She had a stern look on her face. "Sorry, sis.." He apologized. Ugh.. I wanted out of here.. Now.

Jerry had fallen asleep, and when he awoke, Angela was standing before him, in a different outfit. She was wearing what looked like a medieval athletic top, along with a blue skirt and shorts. The top exposed most of her stomach, and Jerry almost felt he needed to look away. "Do you like my outfit?" She asked. She posed, and he couldn't help but smile. This was the Angela he remembered. "Sure. But what's with the tiara?" He asked. "Makes me look more regal, don't you think?" She tilted her head and blew him a kiss. "Oh.. Can I go now?" He was becoming agitated. "You don't want to stay?" She asked. She looked dissapointed. "Well, being chained up is fun and all, but I'd rather be going.." He said sarcastically. "But I haven't gotten to play with you yet!" She protested. She held his chin up with her left hand, and stroked his cheek with the right one. "I need to find something.." He said. He gazed into her eyes, and saw their color was the normal light blue. I could've sworn they were darker.. He thought. "I'll move you to a chair if you'd like.." She offered. He accepted, and she unchained him. Now, you'd think he would've bolted, but instead he let her chain him to a chair. Why? Because he was curious as to what had happened to her.

"Lemme go home!" I protested again. "She's not gonna stay quiet, is she, Kaitlin?" Cason asked. "Nope." Kaitlin replied. "Why must I go back to the dream dimension?" I asked. "Because. You are wanted as the ambassador for.." Cason was cut off by Kaitlin. "We want to welcome you back." She said. I wanted to know what they were up to, but I didn't have time to find out. The picked me up and walked through a portal.

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2013-05-22 10:16:12

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-22 03:19:03)
Jerry sat as calmly as he could while Angela styled his hair. "What purpose does this serve?" He asked. She clipped his bangs, and then answered. "You need to look nice, instead of like a shaggy dog." She giggled at the last part, and continued styling and shaping his hair. "Stop." He said. Surprisingly, she stopped. "What is it?" She asked. He couldn't see her expression, but he assumed it wasn't pleasent. "I need to leave." He said. He awaited an answer.

"Alright." She answered. He awaited a slap, a fireball, something. But nothing came. Just the clicking of the locks. "Thanks. I gotta go." He said. He stood up, and she tackled him. Her eyes were burning. "I didn't permit you to leave." She spoke in an eerie voice. He gazed into her flaming eyes, and tried to calm her. "Angela, get a hold of yourself. I. Need. To. Leave. Okay? You can come with me." He explained. She punched him, and he cringed. "Your just going to lock me up again!" She yelled. She slapped him again, and held him down. "No. I'll make sure you stay with me. Okay? Just like old times!" He spoke. They stared at eachother for a few long moments, and Angela finally agreed to accompany him.

I was back in the dream dimension. And everything was just as I remembered it. The eerily cheerful people, the bright colors everywhere, the thriving city. It looked so much better than the nightmare dimension. I was almost happy to be there. Except, she was still technically banished. "Being back is awesome! Right?" Cason asked Me. "No. I'm banished, Remember?" I told him. He got a confused look on his face, and stayed silent. I was lead through the massive city, past all of it's tall buildings, and right to the center. The tallest building was considered to be the palace, and beneath the palace, was the prison. I was lead into the palace, and up to the middle floor, which I was checked out, and lead up another floor, and Cason left at that one. And then there was another floor, and another, and we slowly made our way to the topmost floor. The one I least liked.

The top floor was the most regal, and was also home to my mother. My mother, was married to the "King." And the "King" hates me. The two siblings lead me into the private chambers, and then left.

Leaving me alone.
Hands tied behind my back.
In the dark.

Perfect setting. I sat quietly for a few minutes, until I heard voices coming from outside the door. Unfortunately, they passed. I was alone for forever, until my step-dad walked in. "Hello, daughter." He said. He wasn't very kind. More stiff and business-like. His black hair was slicked back, and his suit was pressed, cleaned, and perfect. "You gonna untie me?" I asked. "Promise not to do anything?" He said. He looked at me funny, but then resumed his normal, droll expression. "Fine.." He untied me, and I flexed my wrists. "So, what's up?" I asked.

"I need your help with something." He said. "Sure you do." I said sarcastically. "I need you to.. Ahem. Befriend the king of the Nightmare realm. They've been hostile toward us lately, and we want to remain at peace." He explained. "Are you sure you didn't provoke them?" I asked. He chuckled. "Maybe, but I'd rather not assume that." He said. "So what's in it for me?" I asked. "Your banishment will be lifted." He said. "Sure it will. And I'll get to stay here, instead of with my friends on earth. Sounds peachy." I said sarcastically. "Are you in?" He asked. "Yes."

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2013-05-23 09:41:21

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-23 01:15:17)
^Sorry, but the rules prohibit me from doing anything really sexy..


But then again, rules are meant to be broken.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-23 02:58:47)
Jerry arrived back at the palace at night. Most of the servants had gone to bed, and a few had used this as their free time. He walked down to his room, and let Angela have free reign in it for a little while. He walked down to the servants quarters, and entered the last door. "Diane? You in here?" He called. A girl stepped out of the closet, she was still in the 'uniform'. "Yes, Jerry?" She asked. She walked over to him, and stood in front of him. "Have you heard of a girl named Vanessa, from dimension two?" He asked. Diane smiled and nodded. "Crown Princess Vanessa was banished a few years ago, after her mother married the 'king'. The king didn't really like her. Anyway, she was adopted by a family in earth, and stayed there for three/four years, until you came a long. I'm pretty sure you know the rest." She said. "Thanks. What's our current ties with them?" He asked. "They're quite peaceful, except for a few that have provoked some of our border creepies." She explained. He smiled. Walking wiki.. He thought. "Are they trustworthy?" "Depends on who your talking about." She finished. He thought for a moment, and thanked her. She smiled, and kissed his cheek. "Your very welcome, Jerry." She said.

Jerry returned to his room, and found Angela asleep in a chair, with her bathrobe on. Don't wake the bears.. Jerry thought. He smiled and took of his Jacket, setting it on the bed. He changed shirts, and left the room quietly. During the night hours, the palace was pretty quiet. It was ironic, considering that it was full of creepypastas. He entered the throne room. It was dimly lit, and nobody was in it. He walked up the steps to the throne, and pushed a button on the side of it. The throne slid back, revealing a hidden hole in the floor. He jumped in, and let the throne slide back into it's place.

I was enjoying being back more than I expected I would. The tall buildings and flashing lights reminded me of all those times.. "When do you plan to leave?" Mr. Step-dad asked. Correction: Get out. I thought. "Mm, Now I suppose." I answered. I brushed past him and walked to the portal room. It wasn't very big, just an octagonal room. I took a deep breath, let it out, and jumped.

Jerry landed on both feet. He smiled at the thought of his mom seeing him do that. He flipped a switch, and a long row of lights turned on. Leading him down a tunnel. He dashed to the end in mere minutes, and paused at the door at the end. It's been awhile. He thought. He stood for a moment, preparing himself for what lie beyond. He popped his neck and cracked his knuckles, then shoved the door open.

Vanessa stumbled out of the portal in Jerry's palace, trying to catch her balance. She realized it was nighttime, and decided to wait where she was. This palace portal room was much bigger and more elaborate than the one in G'nar, but she didn't care. It had a waiting area off to one side, and she sat down there, and fell asleep.

Jerry walked into a circular, domed room. It was fair sized, about the size of a half a basketball court, except round. On the far side of the wall, was a female, chained against the wall. "Hello, Britt." He said. She jerked at the sound and scowled. "What do you want?" She rasped. "Do I always have to want something? I can't just visit?" He said. She spat at him, and laughed. "You never come 'ere for anything more 'n to take your anger out on me." She replied. He walked toward her, and she cringed. "I'm not here to hurt you." He said. Trying to ease her nerves. "Right. That's wha' you said last time, 'n you still ended up beatin' me to death." She snorted. "Do you remember why I locked you down here?" He asked her. She stood up, and was taller than him. "You put me in 'ere, because I loved you, 'n you didn't 'Deem' it appropriate! You said I was a 'Too destructive'! 'N you know why?" She yelled, but he interrupted her. "Because you always wanted to impress me." He finished. "We've been over this before, decimating the lowlands was downright unacceptable!" He replied. She reached out and stroked his cheek. "Ah, but we are meant to be destructive." She said. "No. We aren't. For the past three dozen rulers, none have done something so brash and stupid as you did!" He yelled at her. Her dirty brown hair was in her face, and she brushed it away. "I still like you Jerry. Nobody else comes and visits me." She said. That's because nobody else knows this place exists. He thought. "I've come to retrieve you." He said. She laughed, thinking he was joking. But when he didn't respond, she realized he was serious. "On one condition." "What?" She asked. "You stay with me. No tormenting anyone. No blowing up anything. No destructive behavior. Alright?" He offered her a chance she might never get back. And she accepted.

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2013-05-24 10:04:08

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-23 21:50:13)
^Thanks.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-24 03:13:57)
I awoke to the sun, shining through the window. I got up and wandered through the palace for a little while, until I found the garden. In the garden, was a gazebo. And in the gazebo, was a guy. "Hello?" I called. He turned around and waved. He had short, blonde hair, a goatee, and glasses. He looked handsome to me, but also a lot older. "Are you from around here?" He asked as I walked up to him. "No.. I'm not." I admitted. I also noticed he had a guitar. "Do you play?" I asked him. "Sure. Wanna here something?" He asked. I nodded, and he played a little tune.

Jerry awoke to Brittany's smiling face. She had cleaned up, and looked like a completely new person. "Good morning, sleepyhead." She spoke cheerfully. She curled his hair around her finger and kissed his cheek. Maybe letting her go wasn't such a good idea.. He thought. She held him and curled around him. "What's your schedule for today?" She asked. "Hmm.." He thought for a moment, and decided that it would be a good day to go swimming along the reef. "Do you want to visit the seaport with me?" Jerry asked her. She smiled and said "Yes." But he assumed it was because she'd follow him anywhere.

I laughed as the young man played his guitar. He sang in a sweet voice, and his lyrics where hysterical. "What is your name?" I asked him. "Aaron." He replied. He smiled and bobbed his head to his own music. Which added all the more to My laughter. When he finally finished his song, he said he had to be somewhere. So he packed his guitar into it's case and left. "I wonder if all N-dimension denizens are this cheerful.." I thought aloud.

Jerry made his way through the city. It looked medieval, with cottages and street vendors and a massive market. Unlike other 'kingd', Jerry wasn't mobbed by citizens. He simply walked through the city, shaking hands with a few people, saying "Hello." here and there. He acted as a normal citizen, and Brittany asked him why. "The best way to help people, is to walk in their shoes." He told her. Brittany wondered why he didn't use his power to rule supreme. He reached the seaport within an hour, and was glad to reach it before it became busy. It had a massive dock that stretched nearly a mile out to sea. The ships in it were modern, electricaly powered and equipped with radar and sonar. "This," Jerry said in an authoritative voice, "Is Maryville harbor."

He gestured to four massive warships. The Fearie, the Doomsday, the Azalea, and the Storm-Bringer. All named by his aunt Alexandria, in honor of his coronation. "These are what we plan to use in our retaliation against D-Dimension." He said. Brittany's eyes were wide in awe. "What'd they do to you?" She said worriedly. He shook his head in anger. "They destroyed our settlement in the north, then subsequently destroying our trade lines." He explained. She shook her head in disgust. Wondering why they would attack. "We leave in three hours."

One hour later..

I wandered about the castle, looking for Jerry. I asked a few of the servants, and found one that pointed me to where she last saw him. The gates.. I walked there and asked the gaurds which direction he took, and they said the harbor. I started walking, and wondered why he left without telling me.

Two hours later..

Jerry was busy making final preparations for voyage, so Brittany decided to wander through the shops for a little while. She saw various knick-knacks and such, but nothing really interesting. She was walking out of a shop, when somebody ran into her. They tumbled and fell. And when they finally untangled, the other person apoligized. "Who are you?" Brittany asked her.

"I'm Vanessa. Who are you?" I asked. "Brittany." She responded. I brushed the hair out of my eyes, and heard a horn blow. "What's that?" I asked Brittany. "Oh! That's the departure signal! I'm gonna be late!" She exclaimed. She took off running before I could ask what kind of departure, so I decided to run after her. I followed her to the docks, where she boarded a humongous ship. I saw Jerry boarding another, and I followed him. "Jerry! Wait up!" I called. He stopped at the top and waited for me. "Where are you going?" I asked when I made it to the top. "War." He said.

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2013-05-27 04:43:46

It's time for review, kiddo!
imawsome12 (2013-05-24 04:40:27)
Still good, but you lost me at he thought it was a good day to go swimming by the reef...
Hi.
MeNobody14 (2013-05-25 18:54:00)
^ You should use quotation marks when you are quoting someone.
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-26 21:50:06)
"War?! With who?" I asked. "You." He said as he glared at me. "What? Oh.." I remembered what step-dad had said. "Please, stop." I pleaded. "No." He went back to his business, and I had no choice but to follow him. "Please Jerry! Don't do this!" I pleaded again. "Nigel," He signaled to one of the men. "Take her below deck." He said. The man grabbed my arm and lead me below decks, where he tied me to a stake. "Hey! Let me go!" I protested. "Capn's orders.." He muttered. He went back above, and the horn blew one last time. I cried as the ships pulled out. Headed for doom.



I hope you liked it! I'll start on number three tonight! Please comment on what you thought of it. Whether it sucked to you or not!
It's time for review, kiddo!
kblackeagle (2013-05-27 01:25:07)
I really liked number 2, but Jerry changed ALOT. Number 3 shoud be "The Invasion"
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
MeNobody14 (2013-05-27 02:15:04)
It's actually "Invasion of dimensions."
It's time for review, kiddo!
kblackeagle (2013-05-28 01:26:00)
Even better!
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
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