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Started by AntiChrist
(2014-10-17 01:07:24)
AntiChrist (2014-10-19 12:02:32)
Levi, what pokemon do you want to be?
AntiChrist (2014-10-20 00:09:52)
Chapter 3:

"Everyone get to the building closest to you and get to the top floor. A bunch of ground types are using dig and are about to pop up all over the place."

Said Lance telepathically to all the groups. Everyone was silent for a while. With sandslashes army all around them, nobody could easily move from their hiding spots. Lance kept ordering everyone to stay put. He thought for a while.


"Damn... I need some sort of way to get everyone closer to the factory without being spotted. Maybe a distracion would work, but we'd ha e to sacrifiece an entire group to make one that could be noticed by an entire city... No, even if it were possible, it'd put the whole group in too risky of a situation. I need ideas..."

Cr1tikal was getting alittle worried


"Is everything alright, Lance?"

He asked

"Hm? Oh, I'm just trying to figure out something."

Said Lance

"Try asking the others for ideas."

Suggested cr1tikal. Lance was hesitant for a moment

"....Everyone, I need to form a distraction that can be seen and heard from every part of the city but without being seen. Any ideas?"

Said Lance

"Uh... I could use double team and start running around city with the fake mes. I could be all over the place at once while still hiding. "

Said poke

"Hmm... Are you strong enough to make 3,000 of you by using double team and make them spread among the city equally before being destroyed by the lookouts?"

Said Lance


"...I haven't tried making that many yet. I've only done around 18 so far. I coukd try."

Said poke

"I don't know. We have to be absolutely sure it will work before we try it. Any other ideas?"

Said Lance. I remember chilling inside a lantern hanging from the ceiling with my arms folded behind my head while listning to the telepathic conversation between lance and everyone giving suggestions. Being small allowed me to hide pretty well. I looked at the little flame near me in the lantern. If we had a strong enough fire type, an explosion big enough might work. Suddenly I sat up so hard the the lantern started rocking back an forth, making me dizzy.

"Lance, I have an idea"

I said

"Let's hear it."

"Sometimes I use phsycic on the air and compress it into a really tiny sphere. Sometimes,if I have enougn energy I can form a small combustion by doing that. If you did it, you could probably make a huge explosion in the city somewhere and everyone around would go check it out."

I told him. With Lances' strength, I could only imagine how big of an explosion he could make by using phsycic.

"I think I could pull that off without being caught... I'll have to make sure there's a place in the city without anyone there so I don't accidentally kill anybody. "

Lance focused in all directions, looking for the ideal spot. There was an area that was completely reduced to rubble that was very centurally located with nobody there.

"Get ready, men. When I say go, get as close to the factory as you can without being seen then hide again. "

Lance compressed tons of air into a small area. He made sure to stay far away from that area while doing that so he wouldn't be spotted. The explosion was a lot bigger than he thought it would be. I could hear the paniced screams of our enemies all over the place, having no idea what just happened.

Meanwhile in the abandoned factory...

"Carl?"

"Yes?"

"What the hell was that...?"

"I'm being told there was a large explosion, sir."

"How large of an explosion are we talkin' here? Why the hell is everyone moving from where they're supposed to be? It was obviously a distraction. You an I both know that those idiots from the state are too soft to actually blow one of us up. They'd rather have us detained."

Sandslash slammed his palms against the desk. Breloom jumped.

"WHY ARE THE BRATS NOT EVEN HERE YET! DID THEY GO TO CHECK OUT THAT EXPLOSION TOO?"

Yelled sandslash

"We're here, boss."

Said the snorlax with the grenade launcher between its' buttcheeks as it walked in, followed by abomasnow, a ampharos, a gigantic kingler and an emboar.

"The fatasses have arrived... Well done. "

Said sandslash

"I sure hope my brother Leviathon comes. I can't wait to kick his ass."

Said the snorlax

"Does he keep all his weapons in his ass like you do?"

Said sandslash

"He will never have my skills. Where's blastoise anyway?"

Said the snorlax

"Remember when you guys screwed up two weeks ago back when we were escaping from that perfect IV golem? "

The ampharos winced

"He's the one that took the punishment this time, isn't he?"

Asked ampharos

"Correct. It's going to be you, snorlax, this time if there's any more failure. You talk to much."

The snorlax laughed nervously.

Lance was now teleporting on top of the factory, watching everything, telling everyone where not to go, where they wouldn't get caught, when suddenly he felt a familiar presence from inside the factory.

"Is that.... Carlos11??!"

Lance thought for a moment. Why would Carlos11 be inside the factory where the enmy was?

"Attention, everyone. It appears that the enemy has captured carlos11."

Said Lance finally. Everyone was shocked

"Now way..."

Said Nutsy. Carlos11 had kicked Nutsys ass twice just for the fun of it. There's no way he could get captured.

"What the hell is going on in there..."

To be continued



Nutsy (2014-10-20 00:55:23)
Aw... For a while I thought Leviathan would be the ass Snorlax.

If we're talking Smash Bros., Carlos has kicked my ass more than twice.

PhoenixDawn (2014-10-20 01:06:32)
"More than twice"
More than ten times in a row.
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Nutsy (2014-10-20 02:06:39)
I wouldn't say in a row.

AntiChrist (2014-10-20 02:18:54)
Didn't carlos say the only electronic he owned was a 3ds? It's only natural he'd kick ass in that game.
Nutsy (2014-10-20 02:30:17)
How does he post here while we play Smash, then?

AntiChrist (2014-10-20 12:43:37)
Good question...
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-20 16:27:35)
Exactly.
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little5 (2014-10-21 19:50:20)
DSi
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-21 20:06:16)
That or a phone, or a computer.
But he could also have another 3Ds.
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Nutsy (2014-10-21 20:51:29)
Leviathan should have been Wailord.

PhoenixDawn (2014-10-22 01:15:14)
I'd like to see that.
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AntiChrist (2014-10-25 01:19:43)
Chapter 4:

When we finally entered the factory, each group entered at once from different ends of the building. Everyone was told to go to the bottom floor where most of the hostages were kept. In group A, Nutsy ran ahead into a dark hallway. There were pokemon of all kinds holding loaded machine guns. Nutsy sliced all the guns in half using slash. All the enemies were now panicked at the site of their guns suddenly explosing into pieces. Thanks to Nutsys' speed, they didn't even know what hit them. Nutsy came back around again and kicked each of the enemies in their shins very hard, making most fall over.

I was teleporting close behind, tazing all the enemies while they were weak. While they were unable to fight back, everyone else in group A came by to defeat them. Lance then teleported to us then teleported all the enemies to the police station all the way back in the state.

The hallway we were going down went to a dead end. This was the direction Lance ordered us to go. Suddenly, Lance used phsycic on the wall, opening it up like twoo doors. There was a secret elevator there.

"Step inside the elevator. It will take you to the hostages, however, one of the elite members of the enemy group will be there. Be prepared."

Said Lance. Meanwhile, in group B, Kishy and Dimentia were defeating all the enemies by themselves while the rest followed closely behind. While the enemies were on the ground, a butterfree that was in group B came by using sleep powder on all the enemies. A Medicham in group B used safeguard so that Kishy and Dimentia wouldn't fall asleep.

Lances' plan was absolutely flawless. When Dimentias' group got past all the enemies, they also came to a dead end.

"Jake, wait exactly 14 seconds then use thundershock directly infront of you."

Ordered Lance. Just as the pichu unleashed his thundershock, the walls infront of them opened, revealing a secret elevator full of pokemon with loaded machine guns about to open fire on everyone in group B. However, they weren't able to because the were being electricuted. Dimentia granned every enemy in the elevator and threw them out. The butterfree used sleep powder on them so that Lance could teleport them to the station.

"It's creepy how Lance knows where everyone is..."

Said Josh

"It's because he's the most powerful phsycic type pokemon in the state. He knows where everyone and everything is within 5000 meters of him is. He planned out everything for a reason. We probably have two high tier members in our group because there's a particularly powerful enemy where we're headed."

Said Medicham

"Yes, he planned out everything pefectly. I bet not even dedenne could outsmart him."

Said Dimentia

Meanwhile in group C, every enemy guarding their location was attacking Cr1tikal at once. The area was Dark. Everyone else in group C was clinging to the ceiling, unable to be seen by the attackers. Cr1tikal stood perfectly still, unflinching while all the enemies punched, scratched and kicked at his metal body, barely able to breach his strong defense.

Group C was about to initiate yet another piece of Lances' master plan. Clearence was eager to see how this would play out. Cr1tikal waited for the enemies to run out of most of their energy, then used phsycic, making the enemies barely able to move. If it weren't for wasting most of their energy, they would've been able to at least fight back a little bit as the rest of group C jumped down from the ceiling and kicked their asses.




The rest of the groups used their strategies and got to their elevators at the exact same time as everyone else. This way, no individual group would have to fight Abomoasnow, Snorlax, Kingler, Ampharos, Emboar and Carl the breloom all at once. Each would not have to fight more than one of the elite members of the group.


When Group A got down to where the hostages were, the snorlax spotted them and pulled a rocket launcher out of his ass and pointed it at them.

"FREEZE! TELL ME WHERE LEVIATH-"

"He isn't with us. He's patroling the walls."

I interrupted. I could tell by reading his mind that he and his colleagues already knew we were comming and that he hoped leviathon would be comming. How could he have known though? Had information on our plans been leaked?

Group B was against the Kingler.

"1 v 1 me bruh. "


Said the Kingler. He was about 12 feet tall and had a six pack with large arm muscles.

"Good lord... This guy is ripped."

Said Kishy

To be continued...











This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-10-25 01:20:23

PhoenixDawn (2014-10-25 01:29:53)
Good.
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